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Pow! What an ending!
posted by
MomentsinTime
on May 11, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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Eight year olds or eighty year olds need to be told they look lovely! Men!
posted by
elinjo
on May 5, 2009 at 9:20 AM
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The day after my eighth birthday
Excellent stuff! The ending really did make me laugh.
posted by
2Philomena
on April 2, 2009 at 9:38 AM
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wow..
posted by
Star5_
on April 1, 2009 at 8:21 PM
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F U Dad
This was a really great story and I'm not sure if it was suppose to or not, but the ending made me laugh. I guess this is what dads get for being douche bags.
posted by
mimajo
on April 1, 2009 at 6:04 PM
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WOW!!!
That's mind blowing
posted by
Storm1973
on April 1, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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I love it! I think pig tails are so cute! My daughter wore them for years! Delightful story! Picture day is very important to little girls! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 1, 2009 at 4:19 AM
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