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very nice
posted by
Star5_
on April 1, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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clever creative and brilliant in scope!Poignant within emotional angst.
posted by
merkie
on April 1, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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A sad poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 1, 2009 at 11:29 AM
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very well expressed kyzaman
posted by
drohan254
on April 1, 2009 at 10:42 AM
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kayzzaman
Excellent!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 1, 2009 at 10:37 AM
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Great work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 1, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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Beautiful and very sad... hope you are ok.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 1, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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I'm with Corbin...
very sad....
(Hope you're not actually feeling this way)
posted by
Troosha
on April 1, 2009 at 8:27 AM
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very good description
and thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 1, 2009 at 5:28 AM
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How lonely....how sad.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on April 1, 2009 at 4:40 AM
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for a while there I was a pessimist kayzzaman,
Now turning over to be an optimist Thanks for visiting earlier
posted by
shobana
on April 1, 2009 at 4:07 AM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 31, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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Scarey place to be.
This poem pulls the reader along a path of scariness. It makes me aware of myself and how empty life can be at times. but for some reason I stick around and things change. You need to keep your pendulum moving and the clock is always ticking. Choose good things to present themselves to you and look for good and give good. You are not empty. That is a passing thing in time. If this ais about you, then perhaps you should seek help. God bless you and your emptiness poem.
posted by
michaudblaine
on March 31, 2009 at 10:21 PM
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scary
posted by
Lanetay
on March 31, 2009 at 9:50 PM
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Awesome! You really called it like you saw it :)
posted by
calia14
on March 31, 2009 at 9:28 PM
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