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The passion is beautiful...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 31, 2009 at 10:15 PM
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Re: soulbuilder
lol!
posted by
calia14
on March 31, 2009 at 10:29 AM
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Just another day at the gym! lol
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 30, 2009 at 11:42 PM
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Calia14
Passion so poetically expressed, lovely......
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 30, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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passion described to the fullest!
posted by
Rolldawg99
on March 30, 2009 at 9:34 PM
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Good job
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 30, 2009 at 4:54 PM
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Great poem about passion. Amazing how it slowly dies.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 30, 2009 at 3:53 PM
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Ah yes... I know the feeling well and you described it superbly :-)
posted by
Sinome
on March 30, 2009 at 3:13 PM
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I know of all these feelings
posted by
Lanetay
on March 30, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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Re: What I feel
Wow, thanks!
posted by
calia14
on March 30, 2009 at 7:48 AM
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Calia
A "rush", indeed....
posted by
Troosha
on March 30, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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Very well done my friend
clever use of words indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on March 30, 2009 at 5:38 AM
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Very beautiful...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 30, 2009 at 2:39 AM
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What I feel
I feel the poem is very precise even in its brevity. It hits the nail at its head, that is, it is straight to the point. It speaks of the whole component of passion in great details, inspite of its short length. You are a great writer in the making. No flatteries at all. keep it up!
posted by
intellectual_acumen
on March 30, 2009 at 12:26 AM
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Re: Superbly illustrated, my friend!
Thanks Teddy!
posted by
calia14
on March 30, 2009 at 12:07 AM
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Superbly illustrated, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 30, 2009 at 12:04 AM
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