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Change is inevitable. But the soul...it's immortal.
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 29, 2009 at 5:39 AM
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wonderful.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 28, 2009 at 11:06 PM
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~ fine work.. truly fine
posted by
Blue_feathers
on March 28, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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Great job!
I love this one! The best fires are started from embers! That's my line! And you said it best!
posted by
CRShelley
on March 28, 2009 at 9:51 PM
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strange life how the up become down ...well written Sinome
posted by
drohan254
on March 28, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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"A change of heart"......so sad and then over time to find new light. Brilliant ending.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 28, 2009 at 7:20 PM
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How true. When the fire burns out, a new one must be started.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 28, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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before I write I read you to see how it is done! you are poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on March 28, 2009 at 6:04 PM
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sinome
Eventually, all flames become extinguished
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 28, 2009 at 5:41 PM
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Comparing the passion to a flame is so true.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 28, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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Thanks so...
much for your awesome comments in TymeProse.
posted by
GingerTyme
on March 28, 2009 at 4:18 PM
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This was reflective of when it is over it is time to look for a new star to wish upon! I love the examples and how they tied the imagery together! The congruity is fabulous! Love you so my dear friend! sammy
posted by
sam444
on March 28, 2009 at 3:12 PM
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sometimes you just have to let it die
posted by
Lanetay
on March 28, 2009 at 2:41 PM
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the transforming shape of love from passion to caring ! ??
posted by
merkie
on March 28, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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