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very nice work
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 28, 2009 at 11:17 PM
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Kayzzaman, do you remember the first poem you ever wrote?
posted by
TAPS.
on March 28, 2009 at 6:35 PM
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Kman you do it really good nothing but poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on March 28, 2009 at 6:09 PM
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Kman you do it really good nothing but poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on March 28, 2009 at 6:08 PM
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Kman you do it really good nothing but poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on March 28, 2009 at 6:07 PM
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kayzzaman
Hot damn!! This is fantastic
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 28, 2009 at 5:40 PM
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Your perspective is so refreshing and sometimes frightening at the same time. Your poem builds and twists and turns so beautifully.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 28, 2009 at 5:21 PM
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Thanks so much...
for visiting TymeProse and for your wonderful comments.
posted by
GingerTyme
on March 28, 2009 at 4:20 PM
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Quite a deep poem you get there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 28, 2009 at 3:44 PM
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Exquisite imagery Kazz! I really like this poem! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on March 28, 2009 at 2:28 PM
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Deep, powerful work...well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 28, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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Wow Kaizz... Wonderfully written... Excellent!
posted by
Sinome
on March 28, 2009 at 11:14 AM
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great work.
thanks for sharing.
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 28, 2009 at 9:47 AM
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excellent in the morning, tear flavored coffe has its appeal.
posted by
raywords
on March 28, 2009 at 9:26 AM
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very nice
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 28, 2009 at 9:25 AM
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One of the first funerals I took was for a stillborn child - I remem,ber his name to this day, it was Ryan. Such a terrible sadness and all mixed up with anger and hormones and deep, deep pain.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on March 28, 2009 at 3:49 AM
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wow...
what a good writer you are, K! Xcellent job!
posted by
GingerTyme
on March 28, 2009 at 12:58 AM
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Strange and sort of twisted, but I think that just may be what you were going for
posted by
calia14
on March 27, 2009 at 11:34 PM
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love of sunshine
posted by
Lanetay
on March 27, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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Interesting stuff!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 27, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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lovely poem.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 27, 2009 at 9:53 PM
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