Go to poetry, yay.....xciting poetry in ordinary writing
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posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 28, 2009 at 10:11 AM
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Re: it's not all poetry...just simple life.....
posted by
Star5_
on March 27, 2009 at 8:28 PM
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9star
How cool is that??!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 27, 2009 at 1:35 PM
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Great to hear!!
You deserve love showers, my friend.
posted by
lionreign
on March 27, 2009 at 1:27 PM
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You appear to be trying very hard. Read up on poetry of all types and enjoy it. Then, make your poetry in a similar fasyhion. You need to get rid of the .......'s and line up your lines even for blank verse. Then take a look at the agreement of subject and verbs and be sure they match somewhat. That ought to improve your style some and spell check. Perhaps you do your style on purpose, which means I have to right to say anything about it.
posted by
michaudblaine
on March 26, 2009 at 11:25 PM
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thank you...
posted by
Star5_
on March 26, 2009 at 10:13 PM
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That scum is gone! You will be OK now!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 26, 2009 at 10:09 PM
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