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Re: Lion

Thank you Drohan

It is the moment of greatest potential to me...

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

Thank you, my friend

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Yellowrose55

thank you, I am very glad that you enjoyed it.

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: absolutely pretty.....music maker...

Thanks Sue!

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you! I am especially glad you enjoyed this

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thank you - this poem actually took a lot more work than usual, so I am glad you like it

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha

I'd like it all the time too... but to feel it every now and then is wonderful

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: riri0322

Thank you

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thank you!

posted by lionreign on March 27, 2009 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

Lion

this poem spoke to my mind very strongly and feed it's yearning for the happiness madness too that beautiful moments before the sunrise i adore it too..

posted by drohan254 on March 26, 2009 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

Ups and downs of emotion pull at heart strings . Well done Lion!

posted by merkie on March 26, 2009 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

Awe yes...that adoring sunrise. A wonderfully awesome expression of feelings.

posted by yellowrose55 on March 26, 2009 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

absolutely pretty.....music maker...

posted by Star5_ on March 26, 2009 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is filled with "fantastic lines as Sammie says... My favorite: ..."I yearn for the light
Long hidden but undestroyed, That frees me from sadness And releases me from the wait. ... " I loved it Lion... Superb job

posted by Sinome on March 26, 2009 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

The final breaths of lonely night What a fantastic line and I liked the last line too! What a great poem, loved the cartwheels in there too, it gave it energy! sam

posted by sam444 on March 26, 2009 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

Now that’s waiting for the day to begin, Lion. We should all have such enthusiasm about a new day rising!