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Very evocative and beautiful. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 26, 2009 at 3:36 AM
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so very romantic, its nice to have memories
posted by
Lanetay
on March 25, 2009 at 9:25 PM
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This was such a wonderful poem in reminiscences. Rememeber, remember ... came out so powerfully, and then I know you don't remember, came so poignantly. flooding with memories of how we made love all through the night, until sunlight fell on our bed. Very well done, my princess Marta xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 25, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful! Your love lives, as do the memories - and that is all we have in the end, love and memories, and memories of love...

posted by
Nautikos
on March 25, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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This is incredulous imagery! How very romantic and heart wrenching at the same time! I love it when one loverscarries another when times are tough! Love you so Sinome! I love Paris! Great artists have been there and passed through there too! Fabulous poem! sammy


xoxoxoxoo
posted by
sam444
on March 25, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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very beautiful.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 25, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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I've always been intrigued by people who still remember while the other opts to forget.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 25, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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I am in accordance with Lionreign! Springtime memory!
posted by
merkie
on March 25, 2009 at 12:47 PM
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Paris can do that to a person, but so can Kansas City. When a person is ripe for love, dingy turns to sparkly and clouds have silver linings and ever after one remembers the love and feels the pain of love lost. I remember the Paris of your Poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 25, 2009 at 10:46 AM
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My dear, you have a gift
for reaching to touch the souls of your readers, your poem has such beautiful sincerity that it cannot help but stir emotion. I love this
posted by
lionreign
on March 25, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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Every affirmation of your love is fresh and lively!
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 25, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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Sinome
Perhaps he does remember and if not the memory is held in your heart for the two of you – and what a memory it is! 
posted by
Troosha
on March 25, 2009 at 6:44 AM
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Poignantly reminiscent...
...and reminiscently poignant. Touching and beautiful both ways.
posted by
metalrat
on March 25, 2009 at 6:02 AM
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poetry




on and on
posted by
lestate7
on March 25, 2009 at 2:50 AM
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that is a very beautiful from her to him ...how sad and how wonderful that she remember what he forgot ,..to think alone as they think together ..excellent poem ...sinome

posted by
drohan254
on March 25, 2009 at 2:28 AM
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Aw!

This was so sad!

Great writing!
posted by
calia14
on March 25, 2009 at 12:05 AM
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Sinome
I do remember being in Paris holding hands but it couldn't have been you, but your writing is so good it makes me think it was you luv.

posted by
WileyJohn
on March 24, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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