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wow! straight fire!
posted by
lestate7
on March 22, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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So well written. Your poetry is very special.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 22, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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I am enthralled by your poetry.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2009 at 4:20 PM
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BEAUTIFUL POEM ..
posted by
drohan254
on March 22, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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beautiful work
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 22, 2009 at 3:54 PM
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Yup - you have a unique and enaging style.
posted by
Troosha
on March 22, 2009 at 10:54 AM
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Very strong, concrete images which describe the scene very well. Easy to see and feel what was going on. Excellent. Well done.
posted by
Tiddlypush
on March 22, 2009 at 8:18 AM
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Alive...nature and mankind are breathing beautifully through you poetry.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 22, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Great work!!!
posted by
Ariala
on March 22, 2009 at 5:53 AM
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classic Kayzzaman as I recall from last year. Love your vocabulary too. Om/
shalom
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 21, 2009 at 11:29 PM
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whoa
some of that was rather gruesome, but all very real and raw. I love the "sultry looking leaves"
posted by
calia14
on March 21, 2009 at 10:46 PM
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