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What a great poem! Such exquisite imagery! I thought it was so cool that you saw a syringe instead of a candle! I took a second look and it could have been although my attempt was a candle! Thanks for stopping by! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 20, 2009 at 9:57 PM
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Beautifully written ....
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 20, 2009 at 2:35 AM
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Beautifully written Carl... loved the images and the veiled sensuality that you bestow on your fountain.

Marta
posted by
Sinome
on March 18, 2009 at 9:44 PM
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Great use of words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 18, 2009 at 5:25 PM
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posted by
drohan254
on March 18, 2009 at 2:06 PM
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Very lovely imagery.
posted by
elinjo
on March 18, 2009 at 12:50 PM
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