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A heart touching poem filled with emotion.
It is a wonderful poem sinome!
posted by
muley12
on March 15, 2009 at 12:58 PM
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peace & blessings
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 15, 2009 at 11:51 AM
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So fully of melancholy and sadness. Nothing is worse than feeling alone and abandoned in the presence of the love of your life.
posted by
vogue
on March 15, 2009 at 9:58 AM
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I can relate to it ....
posted by
afzal50
on March 15, 2009 at 7:35 AM
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Truly excellent....couldn't have been better expressed. Thanks for your generous comment on my post. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 15, 2009 at 6:19 AM
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P, poet, poetry , anything having to do with poetry you are!
posted by
lestate7
on March 15, 2009 at 6:13 AM
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This is just superb imagery in the depiction of having one close but not at all! And the commitment to wait is so very admirable! It touches me for I could never wait, I would be down the road in a heartbeat! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 15, 2009 at 2:28 AM
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what a sad feeling expressed very well ..very excellent sinome.
.Those lips I knew so well have a different taste
and what before you took your time in doing, now you do in haste.
Even though you are next to me I feel I am still waiting for you
posted by
drohan254
on March 14, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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we all seem a little sad lately but again you are so beautiful with your
words.
posted by
Kabu
on March 14, 2009 at 10:06 PM
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That is a wonderful but very sad poem. It's so hard when people change so radically.
thanks for visiting me and I left a comment on your comment.
posted by
elinjo
on March 14, 2009 at 9:51 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on March 14, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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Sinome
You have a strong heart and soul that matches the strength of your writing about emotions luv.....
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 14, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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So sad trying to reestablish a relationship like that. Well presented and shows the aching heart!
posted by
merkie
on March 14, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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Heartwrenching!
posted by
calia14
on March 14, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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Sinome
I really hope it isn't
you that experiences such loneliness, so well expressed...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 14, 2009 at 7:28 PM
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These darn men deceiving us
posted by
Lanetay
on March 14, 2009 at 6:30 PM
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