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Soul Builder 101 is a good encourager and gives constructive criticism. I like your poetry!
posted by
mariposa75
on April 3, 2009 at 10:29 AM
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lol
thank you guys, and ok I will get rid of the dark colors. I just figured no one would really read them so why not make it look nice for me to look at. Thanks for the comments
posted by
Simplemind16
on March 12, 2009 at 1:25 PM
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So it goes ---
T “There will be wars and rumors of war.” BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on March 12, 2009 at 3:50 AM
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Soubuilder's right. I love this poem for its sincerity, but we should not give up hope for a better world. I look forward to reading your next poem.
posted by
elinjo
on March 12, 2009 at 12:44 AM
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I love your poetry and its realism. But you have to get rid of all that black that makes reading you near impossible!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 11, 2009 at 10:53 PM
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