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Well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 12, 2009 at 11:40 AM
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Fun and flowing....I like this dance. Wonderfully written.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 12, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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Interesting lyrics... not always You, you, you. x
posted by
patdole
on March 12, 2009 at 4:06 AM
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This is really good. Humorous yet realistic!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 11, 2009 at 10:44 PM
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The last quatrain made for a superb close to a superb poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2009 at 2:35 PM
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Entrancing movement in transformation very creative write Lauren Bravo!
posted by
merkie
on March 11, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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