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And you say this is your first attempt? I don't believe it. Compelling start. Let's see where Mowsey finds love. She does, doesn't she?
posted by
vogue
on March 11, 2009 at 11:14 PM
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TLove on the Rocks Neil Diamond synchronized with a Cary Grant film clip. (<http://www.carygrant.net/>) I think that you include everything that you need: a home setting, protagonist, and desire love. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on March 11, 2009 at 9:52 PM
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Really great story. You have written it so very well.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 11, 2009 at 12:47 PM
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Looks like your story is off and running. Great start!
posted by
merkie
on March 11, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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