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Arrogance is definitely a bad thing to have.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 11, 2009 at 4:07 PM
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Sinome, what a tragic picture of one who has everything (or thinks he does)
only to find at day's end he has nothing and no one...reminds me of "pride comes before a fall"..
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posted by
Rumor
on March 11, 2009 at 2:30 PM
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The imagery is superb!
posted by
elinjo
on March 11, 2009 at 1:06 PM
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Well done! I can see him, just as you describe him, engrossed in his work and the works he has already completed.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 11, 2009 at 11:24 AM
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Tragic
To be so full of oneself that you forget the important things
posted by
lionreign
on March 11, 2009 at 9:21 AM
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We must show our love and affection to those near us. Ambition tends to blind us from these realities and makes us insensitive. Can feel this pain in your work.
posted by
hardilaziz
on March 11, 2009 at 5:49 AM
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So very true! Such exquisite imagery presented with this poignant thought too! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2009 at 4:21 AM
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A very sharp wake up call my dear Sinome!
there must be many who can relate to this reality! Very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks my friend
posted by
mariaki
on March 11, 2009 at 3:34 AM
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A profound truth, beautifully expressed. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on March 11, 2009 at 12:34 AM
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Chilling!
posted by
calia14
on March 10, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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Reminds me of me! Yet, I have the Lord with me and any love inferior is not worth it! So, the dark side cookers and fingerers need to find out where they went wrong! It is that serious....they all got to pay ..in suffering!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 10, 2009 at 11:03 PM
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The mystique of this character and the description of the mood and consequences strikes me as awesome love. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on March 10, 2009 at 10:03 PM
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Sinome
I met a priest at Mass on Sunday that was so full of himself and his gift of sermonizing, betcha you could even make him come out nicer in poetry too luv...
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 10, 2009 at 9:54 PM
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so well put it together.....
posted by
Star5_
on March 10, 2009 at 9:32 PM
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