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Joe, this is fantastic, natural talent and a story well told. Congratulations.
posted by
patdole
on March 12, 2009 at 4:03 AM
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Write on Joe. it is starting so well. I think reading it aloud will help the final rhytm flow exactly how you want it. I will be waiting for more! You are exposing a fime heroine!
posted by
merkie
on March 10, 2009 at 6:49 PM
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im not sure what u mean.....
posted by
spiderfly
on March 9, 2009 at 11:03 AM
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Good morning Joe! I think this is moving along nicely! I have a couple of questions: Is there a rhyme scheme? Does it need to follow a the four-stress, the-stress lines? And do you need to include a refrain? I was curious because I would watch for those things when I read the final draft in its entirety! This is going to ba a wonderful achievement! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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(joe speaking) thank u mum and thanks for the help and advise you've given me :)
what do you think wayne?? oops im sorry I mean Pat. lol
posted by
spiderfly
on March 8, 2009 at 5:11 AM
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wow Joe, I am so proud of you....mum
posted by
spiderfly
on March 8, 2009 at 4:54 AM
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