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                    you are much more better than your mother can understand, so sad
                
                my prayers for your peace....  
                
                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on March 7, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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                Well done!  I'm sorry for all you went through, hopefully this is the dawn of a better era!    
                
                    posted by
                    calia14
                     on March 7, 2009 at 1:14 PM
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                    Re: Toastpcs
                
                Thankyou so much for your feedback!  I'm glad that I was able to reach out to other people with this poem.  I believe that this could really send a message to others who might have gone through, or are going through, similar situations.  
  
                
                    posted by
                    Mrs_Laly
                     on March 7, 2009 at 12:17 PM
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                    so sad....thanks for sharing..thinking of you...
                
                beautifully written...  
                
                    posted by
                    _Symphony_
                     on March 7, 2009 at 12:17 PM
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                I am so sorry.  I would never wish the things that I went through on anyone else.  If you ever need to talk, I will be here!!! Thankyou for sharing your thoughts 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Mrs_Laly
                     on March 7, 2009 at 12:13 PM
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                I love the way you wrote this poem. It's very sad but yet very beautiful. I really like it when the writer pours their heart and soul into their work and that's what you just did. Great Job!  
                
                    posted by
                    Toastpcs
                     on March 7, 2009 at 12:04 PM
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                I can empathize with you. I have the same problem. You write extremely well!
  
                
                    posted by
                    Soul_Builder101
                     on March 7, 2009 at 11:51 AM
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