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Brilliant...when one is lost, this is an excellent image of where one might end up! It's a jungle out there.
posted by
yellowrose55
on March 5, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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Glad you reposted. Very good read.
And thanks for the limerick comment.
posted by
scotcanada
on March 1, 2009 at 8:47 PM
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magnificent portrayal of city life I lived behind bars for years
in Sydney inner city "enjoyment.'
posted by
Kabu
on March 1, 2009 at 8:29 PM
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I've seen non-poetry in books & journals.Repeat comment 2 Glenn;Gr8 stuff
We started Sunday and March right, Lord Willing. However, my Evening Bible study got canceled because of the severe weather in the South, coming our way (Maryland) soon. Peace-Metta-Gashho
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on March 1, 2009 at 4:54 PM
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TIMMY, its a sad fact of life that we can become prisoners of our own
cities...or if not us, people we know become trapped in a "city within a city" we don't want to acknowledge. but you've done an excellent job of it here...
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posted by
Rumor
on March 1, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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Re: WOW ! AWESOME !!This could definitely be lyrics for
I have notebooks full of lyrics, no music to go along though. Kingmi was going to do something with some of my lyrics, hmmm, I will have to check in with him.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 1, 2009 at 11:11 AM
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sam
Thanks!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 1, 2009 at 11:10 AM
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WOW ! AWESOME !!This could definitely be lyrics for
a great rock song !!! really.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 1, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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What a great opening line to personify the city! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2009 at 8:47 AM
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