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What a great poem, very well penned. Very heartfelt and the rhyming was great.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on April 17, 2009 at 3:52 PM
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It's never easy telling a child about the departure of a loved one..
or about the hard life as a grown up.. Good post..
posted by
orcalion
on March 24, 2009 at 12:57 AM
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Your words have touched my very soul as I remember growing up without a father. 
posted by
porcelaingoddess1
on March 2, 2009 at 8:00 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on March 1, 2009 at 5:15 AM
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That is so sad. I want to hug both.
posted by
CRShelley
on February 28, 2009 at 7:21 PM
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So sad indeed; and such realism in the conclusion! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 28, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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