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Excellent!
An interesting, many-layered haiku...

posted by Nautikos on March 7, 2009 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool indeed...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 6, 2009 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

Very cleverly composed--

posted by scotcanada on March 3, 2009 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

So do I like the fresh air in the morning!

posted by hardilaziz on February 28, 2009 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting view! I like drifting!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 28, 2009 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Fine haiku! I hope you enjoy, wherever you have run away to.

posted by elinjo on February 28, 2009 at 1:48 AM | link to this | reply

I had to reread tis i think i read dreamers are drifters . neat words to interchange and still make sense! Well done Vicky!

posted by merkie on February 27, 2009 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

Oh LOL You were thinking of my swagman

posted by Kabu on February 27, 2009 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply

I think dreamers can be drifters and thus opens up the imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on February 27, 2009 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

really love it...have a good time !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 27, 2009 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Be sure to run back! :)

posted by Texas_Gem on February 27, 2009 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

I like this...
it gives a real feel of waves...

posted by lionreign on February 27, 2009 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply