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Re: yellowrose55
thank you... I think that kind of reaction is one of the things that keeps me sharing what I write
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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The last half of your poem is.......out of this world. You captured that moment beautifully. Love it all.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 27, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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Re: Spiderfly
Love to...
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:44 AM
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Re: hot like the midday sun (thankfully there's dosuing of water, not douching)
Thanks Salem8!
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:42 AM
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Re: very well said....
Thanks 9STAR
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:40 AM
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Re: Absolutely wonderful
Thanks Skye!!
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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Re: drohan254
Thanks - glad this appealed
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:35 AM
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YEH LETS CELEBRATE
posted by
spiderfly
on February 27, 2009 at 7:34 AM
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Re: CRShelley
It certainly is... just have to make sure that it's not our laurels we are resting on
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:31 AM
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Re: Spderfly
Thanks!! glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:28 AM
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Re: A slight variation I see Lion
Just a little one, I like to bring love back to Earth sometimes... I can get a little to flighty with it
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:25 AM
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Re: Hardilaziz
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed - I thought it was time to shift perspective a little bit
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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hot like the midday sun (thankfully there's dosuing of water, not douching)
http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ONrAwhkxKjLKGM:http://www.forestwaterfalls.com/images/Douglas-Waterfalls.jpg
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 27, 2009 at 7:15 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you!! Glad you liked this one
Thanks for the explanation... I was a bit nervous about asking and I am grateful that you didn't perceive it as an attack (some have in the past) or as offensive
posted by
lionreign
on February 27, 2009 at 7:15 AM
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very well said....
posted by
Star5_
on February 26, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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Absolutely wonderful
posted by
skye08
on February 26, 2009 at 4:24 PM
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the radiation of the flame in your poem put my heart fire on ..an expert's description of love's relation ...
posted by
drohan254
on February 26, 2009 at 1:59 PM
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It is so easy to rest...in love!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 26, 2009 at 12:54 PM
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so sexy and full of earth fire passion, great stuff
posted by
spiderfly
on February 26, 2009 at 12:13 PM
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A slight variation I see Lion
a lot of fire and passion here; very eloquent with excellent imagery my friend; superb; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 26, 2009 at 10:07 AM
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Passionate and highly charged.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 26, 2009 at 9:58 AM
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Flaming with sensuality Phew !Well done Lion!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:34 AM
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So ablaze, how can there be rest! I adore this one! I love how there has to be two in love or there is no love at all! Regarding the penultimate, I wanted it to be different than the first to make it more revelent to the character there! I think it is the lead in to the base of the stanza that poses the problem! I may just go back to the words of the original stanza! It has been bugging me since I made that decision to go that route! Thanks for the input! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 26, 2009 at 8:18 AM
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