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Your daughter has celebrated wonderfully how much she loves you...and the "jelly beans" just make her poem that much sweeter.
History does have a hold....and tricks us all the time.
Nicely done Merkie.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 27, 2009 at 11:21 PM
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Bewitched was awesome! I should try it sometime.. And Jelly Beans was superb!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 26, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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Re: Both lovely
Thank you Lion!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:20 AM
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Re: snowview
Thank you Nita. Cheers!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:19 AM
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Re: vogue
You are so welcome. Thank you for reading my poems!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:18 AM
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Re: I see mother and daughter both have talent galore my dear!
Hello Maria, Thanks so much!Shelly's inventive form was a fun challenge. Maybe give it a try!
Always surprses in challenges.
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:17 AM
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Re: sam444
It is a fun form to adhere to! Thanks Shelly/sam
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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Re: lovely 7-yr old (blessid chile!) and inspired joint-venture all round.Brava
Hey salem Thank you so much!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:14 AM
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Re: Taps
Mona discovered her talent for poetry in university and has her own unique style. I hope she will continue to write! Thanks Betty!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:12 AM
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Re: lustorlove
Thanks lustorlove!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:10 AM
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Re: Bewitching!
Thanks for reading!
posted by
merkie
on February 26, 2009 at 9:09 AM
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Both lovely
Well done, both of you
posted by
lionreign
on February 26, 2009 at 7:26 AM
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Your daughter is as talented and creative as you.....congratulations to both of you! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 26, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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Bewitching, bewitching. Thanks for reproducing them here and for catching up with my adventures.
posted by
vogue
on February 26, 2009 at 5:20 AM
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I see mother and daughter both have talent galore my dear!
I did especially enjoy your attempt at Shelly's invention! very much so; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 26, 2009 at 4:54 AM
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Outstanding! I am so pleased you tried my invented form! It was fantastic! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on February 26, 2009 at 3:51 AM
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lovely 7-yr old (blessid chile!) and inspired joint-venture all round.Brava
http://tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:YBHLmH5lDE_YoM:http://www.metafro.be/prelude/prelude_pic/Citrus_limon1.jpg
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 25, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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Great work by both of you.
Maybe you should team up often.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 25, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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great poems, you daughter is very talented, and of course so are you
posted by
Lanetay
on February 25, 2009 at 6:37 PM
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Bewitching!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 25, 2009 at 6:15 PM
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Re: drohan254
Thank you so much!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:11 PM
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Re: Pass the jelly beans please!
Thank you for reading. I will post some more of Mona's work!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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Re: spiderfly
You are most kind Lauren. Thank you!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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Re: great !!!!
Thank you very mch Hazel.
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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Re: Nicely done, as usual...
Merci beau coup Teddy!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:07 PM
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Re: hardilaziz
Thank you !
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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Re: CRShelley
I will tell Mona. She is doing the last term in her bachelors degree in social work so her poems are on hold . She is an awesome poet and I will indeed post some more>Thank you so much!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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a very beautiful poems merkie
posted by
drohan254
on February 25, 2009 at 2:45 PM
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Mona, That was very good! You should write and post more. I want more!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 25, 2009 at 1:38 PM
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Pass the jelly beans please!
Mona is a chip off the block. Both are good works! Thanks for sharing!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 25, 2009 at 1:07 PM
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wonderful as always
posted by
spiderfly
on February 25, 2009 at 12:07 PM
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great !!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 25, 2009 at 10:11 AM
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Nicely done, as usual...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 25, 2009 at 9:50 AM
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Very touching indeed.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 25, 2009 at 9:44 AM
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