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Beautiful..
Makes me really miss Melbourne summer sky at night..
posted by
orcalion
on March 4, 2009 at 4:53 AM
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Fabulous imagery! Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 25, 2009 at 8:42 AM
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Very good!!!
I loved the first one in particular
posted by
lionreign
on February 25, 2009 at 8:20 AM
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Excellent descriptive pieces my friend!
beautifully written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 25, 2009 at 4:43 AM
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very beautifully described and expressed
posted by
drohan254
on February 25, 2009 at 3:49 AM
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I am ready for some beautiful summer skies! sam /Shelly
posted by
sam444
on February 25, 2009 at 12:30 AM
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Oh and Merkie.....(
I posted more of Wild Haven too...)
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 24, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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Thank You Merkie
For this tactile view of Summer. Oh, bring it ON!
Glad you enjoyed the grandson poem.
posted by
scotcanada
on February 24, 2009 at 10:45 PM
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I runaway for a while and look...I come back and you are still writing stellar stuff...Missed you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 24, 2009 at 10:35 PM
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What fantastic colors and imagery! I caught up with the earlier ones today---all equally powerful and beautiful! Thanks for commenting on my post; watch out for the next part tomorrow! God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 24, 2009 at 10:15 PM
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Margaret, you must be the up & coming American Hajin. LOve your diction
... perhaps why I love poetry, because few outside poetry and poetic-prose (like TexGem wrote in Manna 4 hours ago) use words like your's...our's... the People's...Amen!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 24, 2009 at 10:03 PM
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guess you are looking forward to spring
posted by
Lanetay
on February 24, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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guess you are looking forward to spring
posted by
Lanetay
on February 24, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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"Transformation" reminds of a place I sat watching the night coming...and changing. Your words beautifully transform.
And that cold blue river fly'n by. Lovely haiku too.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 24, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks Bill I like that melancholic color tone. We sing like that sometimes!!!
posted by
merkie
on February 24, 2009 at 7:37 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you so much Betty!
posted by
merkie
on February 24, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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Re: spiderfly
Thank you Lauren!
posted by
merkie
on February 24, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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You use beautiful imagery in a consistent melancholic color tone love. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on February 24, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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The sunset sailing by melts into ten thousand stars! -- The whole thing is beautiful, but this line is very special.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 24, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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i love the way there is colour in this. thanks.
posted by
spiderfly
on February 24, 2009 at 12:26 PM
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