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Covering your eyes from the blinding sun-----see nothing.
Very satisfying lines those two. Great poem!

posted by scotcanada on March 4, 2009 at 4:30 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome close! Whatever you decide to do please keep sharing your [uplifting] poetry! sam

posted by sam444 on February 23, 2009 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Wise advice! Thank you.

posted by elinjo on February 22, 2009 at 2:12 AM | link to this | reply