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The stress of the dark dreams is not restfull. Your images toss and turn in my mind, Well done!
posted by
merkie
on February 25, 2009 at 8:42 AM
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after every break up I would go to bed
and know that tomorrow would be a new day. It helps to keep a positive attitude.
posted by
muley12
on February 22, 2009 at 4:33 PM
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Sinome
Such hope we place on the morning – that it might wipe away our night-time fears, angst, and disappointments. You take your reader to that very moment with your usual elegance….
posted by
Troosha
on February 22, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on February 21, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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Great as usual and compelling read.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 21, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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That is last line is so haunting to me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 21, 2009 at 4:24 PM
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The morning is truly full of possibilities, and banishes the demons of the dark. Very beautiful thoughts and imagery. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 21, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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Sinome, I think you've captured "morning" very well..it can erase the
tears and fears of the night, or even of yesterday, but we are too quick to find new ones to haunt us..
...
posted by
Rumor
on February 21, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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Good morning sweetie! Stopped in for an imagery fix, thank you! I hope you have a glorious day today! Love you, sammy!
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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You do score 2 thmbs up....
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 20, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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like always so special and thank you
posted by
Kabu
on February 20, 2009 at 8:47 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful! And for some reason, especially in the first part, I was reminded of the sounds and rhythms found in Shakespeare's sonnets...
And tomorrow I'll catch up with the other poems I haven't read yet...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 20, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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PS A lot of things have to be matched so that the opertaion goes perfect, which means a waiting period of about another month or so. I'll return to Jaipur tonight after some more tests today. It's so hectic, and at times tough, but don't you worry at all, princess. I'll be fine thanks you for your prayers.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 20, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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The feelings of your poetic heart toudhes me with a force that I so love always. Great writing princess, and from your desert prince to you OK sands
and xoxo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 20, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Love your poetry, Sinome. xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 20, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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Ah, the preconceived enlightenment of the morning's escape (or deliverance) from the revealed truth in jostling sleep! Getting there was contemplative imagery for me as well! I love it! sammy
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on February 20, 2009 at 2:47 PM
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