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Short verses that all became vivid and meaningful in my mind.
posted by
mariss9
on February 24, 2009 at 1:26 PM
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Thank you to everyone!
I am inspired to write more.
posted by
merkie
on February 23, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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great stuff!
All very well written, I especially loved Red Leaves, which gave me such a vivid image, and Dark, which was profoundly disturbing - thank you, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on February 23, 2009 at 3:11 AM
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they all resonated with me
but I like Tossed the best
posted by
muley12
on February 22, 2009 at 4:35 PM
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Wow Merkie....these all struck a chord with me, all so strikingly different and all powerfully written.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 21, 2009 at 6:22 PM
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From colorful imagery to bright emotion your poem shows excellence love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 21, 2009 at 11:23 AM
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merkie, I agree with sam..they are all very good, but "Tossed" hits
home, so to speak..we (I) don't know the impact of one simple stone tossed into "Life"..
..
posted by
Rumor
on February 21, 2009 at 8:59 AM
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I liked them all, but
Tossed was very cool! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2009 at 6:29 AM
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Audacious haiku 'tossed' in the air for lesser mortals to receive- How's that
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 21, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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loved it
posted by
Kabu
on February 20, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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merkie
I loved Red Leaves and Tossed the most luv..................................
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 20, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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Fantastic poem
That Power of Love! 
posted by
Kolekshuns
on February 20, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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merkie
Wonderful! woderful!! wonderful!!!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 20, 2009 at 5:58 PM
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Lovely and hopeful!
posted by
metalrat
on February 20, 2009 at 4:45 PM
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All so very lovely, Merkie!
posted by
Troosha
on February 20, 2009 at 3:05 PM
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Re: merkie ~.~
Mutual admiration Thank you Soul Speaker!
posted by
merkie
on February 20, 2009 at 12:33 PM
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Re: They are all brilliant !!!
Hi Hazel I hopeyour weekend rocks! Thanks!
posted by
merkie
on February 20, 2009 at 12:32 PM
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Re: spiderfly
Excellent I admire your spirit! Thanks Lauren!
posted by
merkie
on February 20, 2009 at 12:32 PM
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merkie ~.~
These are great! I love them all! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 20, 2009 at 12:27 PM
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They are all brilliant !!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 20, 2009 at 12:09 PM
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thank you for your comment on my ´when love can make a difference. You have read in to it so deeply and I take your words of wisdom with gratitude. The spider is there and ready
posted by
spiderfly
on February 20, 2009 at 11:43 AM
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