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                though i'm still trying to piece it together, i think i may understand. worded in segments of thought, a good way of showing the feelings represented here 

  
                
                    posted by
                    Luz_Briar
                     on February 20, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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                wow hot bread
  
                
                    posted by
                    Lanetay
                     on February 20, 2009 at 7:20 PM
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                I'm not sure why, but this poem strikes me as creepy.  I'm a big horror movie fan, so that's not a bad thing.  It has an interesting feel to it, very unique.  
                
                    posted by
                    calia14
                     on February 20, 2009 at 11:59 AM
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                    Interesting...
                
                I am now hungry  -thank you, I enjoyed this  
                
                    posted by
                    lionreign
                     on February 20, 2009 at 4:15 AM
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