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you are in love.....thanks for sharing....
posted by
Star5_
on February 19, 2009 at 3:17 PM
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You so paint a wondrous picture of how love makes us dance. Your poem Lionreign... so exhilarating and full of loves happiness.
posted by
yellowrose55
on February 19, 2009 at 10:29 AM
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Re: the rhythms do have such profound effect
don't they?
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 5:01 AM
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Re: What a picture you paint my dear Lion!
Thank you, my friend!
Your comments are so encouraging
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:59 AM
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That is so cool, music influences my writing too! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 19, 2009 at 4:53 AM
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Re: Luz_Briar
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:51 AM
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Re: interesting perspective
but then emotion doesn't really come from any specific part of the body, does it?
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:48 AM
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Re: Alright u jumping clown :)...
Well... anything to encourage her to want to stay
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:46 AM
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Re: drohan254
Thank you - it means a lot to hear that
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:42 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you! The change in form was influenced by some unusual music which made me want to try longer lines with faster words.... glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:34 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha.. I think if a poem makes somebody think "that's just how I feel sometimes" then it has been a success
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:32 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you, I am very glad that you do
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2009 at 4:31 AM
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What a picture you paint my dear Lion!
almost had me hopping out of my chair; realistic and vivid imagery my friend; very well done; many blessings and thanks (also for your offer which I very much apreciate)
posted by
mariaki
on February 19, 2009 at 4:19 AM
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how adorable!
once again, a clever and cute way of expressing it
posted by
Luz_Briar
on February 18, 2009 at 9:54 PM
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My premise is ...if it emanates from the blood pump..it ain't real. Soul is in the head!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 18, 2009 at 9:41 PM
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Alright u jumping clown :)...
anything to get her to stay...we seem to be birds of the same feather :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 18, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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musical words Lion, it leave an effect always in the listener ears
posted by
drohan254
on February 18, 2009 at 3:06 PM
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What awesome illustrative imagery! It just has a great alliterative bounce to it! It has to succeed! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 18, 2009 at 10:32 AM
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Lion
I love your use of acrobatics – my heart often feels that way when “B” walks in the door. I enjoy how you write about love!
posted by
Troosha
on February 18, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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You are so clever ! I always enjoy my visits to your poems.Encore Lion!
posted by
merkie
on February 18, 2009 at 9:40 AM
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