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Michaudblaine...
Wow! Thanks for the tips! That's a lot of work.
posted by
food4thought
on February 15, 2009 at 10:55 PM
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I love this piece and couldn't resist working on rhyming some.
This is not intended to replace your work, but make this piece more pliable toward music basic. I thought you had a tune in mind, but I douldn't quite figure it out, so here goes:
I know a girl with 14 kids
Made her parents flip their lids
People are rude
People are mean,
She's a litter poppin' machine
That's qualified as a welfare queen.
Down at the clinic filled with rubes.
The doctor has lots of tubes filled with fertile eggs,
Come on baby, spread them legs!
I'll give to you these octa-eggs!
Oh now she's cool and quite the fool.
She's got an entire genetic pool.
Hey hey don't you know
She's much like ole J lo.
A flirty smile with pouty lips
Oh Lord, Lord give her wide berth
To those gileded childbirth hips.
Don't you know when its all done
The taxpayers will have fuled her fun
She's on Facebook
wants to find th kids a dad
God save that poor old lad
Can it be all that bad?
When night time comes
It is time to have 14
All put to bed.
Well 14 kids layin' in beds
Tucking them in and feelin' half dead
By the time she's through
There's no time for bed.
Time to hit the floor again
Welcome back to the hellacious din.
Food's so expensive and needin lots of milk
She really needs to get some help
Like buyin' a cow to have some milk.
Twill' take two cows to keep them fed
Time for food, a baath and bed.
Perhaps it would help if she could chew a cud
While she's up to her elbows in crap and mud.
Lets hear the Chorus one more time
Down at the clinic
The doctor has his hands full
of fertile eggs in lots of tubes
Beggin' her much to spread them legs
Filled with babes to make her day
The happpiest woman lyin' in the hay.
Oh well, hope this put some more rhyme in it and maybe you can change it to even better stuff.
I enjoyed it.MichaudBlaine
posted by
michaudblaine
on February 15, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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That was cool! Great writing my friend! Great Post!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 14, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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