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I love the form you took with this subject... definitely passionate and invocative!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on February 18, 2009 at 10:23 AM
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Re: hardilaziz
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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Re: Rockingrector
Thank you, I am very happy that you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:14 AM
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Re: To me this is a most amazing poem with great insight
Thank you, Chilitree, I am glad you think so
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:13 AM
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Re: universal conflict
Thank you Luz
I must confess the poem shows my honest belief in how we need to move forward and even if I sometimes fail to live up to it I still try
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:11 AM
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Re: drohan254
Thank you - I am glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:10 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you - glad you liked it! Don't worry, it was not an argument between myself and my muse, inspiration came from a number of sources, partly a friend having an argument with somebody and partly the insanity that is international politics (for me the answer is always the same - what better way to deal with an enemy than to become friends?)
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:09 AM
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Re: Remember in school...
That is so true - and yet when we get older we remain enemies for much longer, how is it that children are so much more wise than adults and nations?
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:03 AM
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Re: this brings a true story to my mind..................you said it very well
Thanks Sue, this is a belief I hold close to my heart so I guess my style remains true
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:02 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam - I'm glad I can still surprise you, and that you enjoyed the poem.
Really enjoyed your epic - so reading was a pleasure
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 3:01 AM
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Re: Merkie
I think that slowly, one person at a time, society is moving away from violent answers. So hopefully this can be true on a personal level now and a national one some day soon
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 2:57 AM
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Re: "In the name of the Lord...Let us all yield...Drop those shields...
thank you, Ash, I think this one had been building a while and was influenced by so many conflicts - personal and in the news.
posted by
lionreign
on February 16, 2009 at 2:56 AM
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Great write with great images.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 15, 2009 at 6:33 AM
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Another terrific poem, full of truth. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 14, 2009 at 8:20 AM
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To me this is a most amazing poem with great insight
very well done my friend, and thanks.
posted by
Chilitree
on February 13, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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universal conflict
i enjoyed the whole poem in its urgency, and the way you twisted the ending into something sweet like friendship. anyone can take good things and perverse them to tragedy, but it is a rare talent to turn turmoil into something optimistic.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on February 13, 2009 at 8:34 PM
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Lion ..that was a very strong feeling and verses ..very excellent .loved it ..
posted by
drohan254
on February 13, 2009 at 4:47 PM
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Never heard wiser words... Great poem Lion... I hope written for a friend not personally for you love too deep and too well to be in that position and unless you are with a marble statue, I can't imagine you guys fighting... not after your poems... so... no matter who it was written for, it is excellent! Loved it!
posted by
Sinome
on February 13, 2009 at 3:43 PM
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Remember in school...
if you ever got into a fight with someone...they usually became your best friend.
posted by
CRShelley
on February 13, 2009 at 3:28 PM
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this brings a true story to my mind..................you said it very well
you kept your style.......
posted by
Star5_
on February 13, 2009 at 1:59 PM
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Wise words indeed! It was so off the beaten path, I was shocked at first! I did like the organization of the refrain! Outstanding! Thank you for reading the epic poem it meant a great deal to me! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 13, 2009 at 11:48 AM
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What an excellent day that would be. Perhaps will is the better word choice! great images and post Lion.
posted by
merkie
on February 13, 2009 at 8:58 AM
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"In the name of the Lord...Let us all yield...Drop those shields...
Let love's glory build"....you truly are an amazingly expressive poet my friend! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 13, 2009 at 8:34 AM
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