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posted by
RomaKay
on February 12, 2009 at 8:38 PM
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As Lion said, I kept rolling along with you – hooked onto every word as it spilled out. Love the rusty mind thinking….
posted by
Troosha
on February 12, 2009 at 9:02 AM
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I love the way you use very short lines
it keeps me tumbling through your poem
posted by
lionreign
on February 12, 2009 at 6:51 AM
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i liked it (and i bring an award) but just my way of poetry -
I like shorter poems (Does that mean I am a lazy person? LOL)
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on February 12, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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Re:
Wiccan .many thanks to you
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:35 PM
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Re: It makes you unable to stop reading!
scotcanada..thank you
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:34 PM
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Re: Terrific Poem!
kolekshuns..thankful always
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:33 PM
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Re:
Thanks soulbuilder ,,glad you liked it
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:32 PM
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Re:
CR Shelly...thanks alot..
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:32 PM
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Re:
Thanks ideolojikal
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 11:31 PM
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Outstanding work! This is a great post!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 11, 2009 at 10:27 PM
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It makes you unable to stop reading!
Very compelling.Thanks for the comment too.
Cheers.
posted by
scotcanada
on February 11, 2009 at 10:15 PM
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Terrific Poem!
I love it.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on February 11, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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Very nice! Poetry at its finest!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 11, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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There's no doubt...your mind isn't rusty! Great job!
posted by
CRShelley
on February 11, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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You are very talented, your words are like paint and the paper is the canvas. I enjoyed this
posted by
Ideologikal
on February 11, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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