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Stunning illustration, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 14, 2009 at 8:10 AM
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Thank you all!
I promise to be catching up on my reading soon!
Been a little crazy here at home..Rain is wrecking havoc on things here.....Much thanks to all!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 11, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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Beautiful poetry! Every word participated in creating the eventful atmosphere of expectancy and realization!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 11, 2009 at 8:41 PM
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very picturesque and very romantic, Marion....
a very smart and thoughtful moon indeed to covers its eyes..
..:)
posted by
Rumor
on February 11, 2009 at 4:59 PM
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I just had to catch up on your magnificent work.
your words paint pictures in my mind.
posted by
muley12
on February 11, 2009 at 12:25 PM
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that was avery smart moon ..very romantic images ..like them all wiccan
posted by
drohan254
on February 11, 2009 at 9:07 AM
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Loved it!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 11, 2009 at 7:23 AM
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Wiccan
Oozing with romance… Excellent!
posted by
Troosha
on February 11, 2009 at 6:35 AM
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And that is exactly how it feels isn't it my friend
a kind of love so rare where nothing else exists except for this moment; kudos for the most wonderful fairy tale! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 11, 2009 at 4:36 AM
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Lovely Marion... A very sweet poem about the magic of love... Bravo my friend!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on February 10, 2009 at 10:34 PM
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Lovely ending With the only awareness the two lovers. Delightful
posted by
merkie
on February 10, 2009 at 9:12 PM
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Lovely and descriptive imagery!
I adore these kind of poetic tales and you are good at them!
They take one away to another place and time and remind me in some ways of "The Other Boleyn Girl'...I was so enchanted by that book, I wrote a poem many moons ago about it, lol..
posted by
Katray2
on February 10, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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this is becoming the Romance of the year.
posted by
Kabu
on February 10, 2009 at 7:19 PM
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Kudos!!!!
Exciting & Vividly you brought this dance to a crescendo. Very well done!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 10, 2009 at 7:10 PM
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wow.........
posted by
Star5_
on February 10, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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