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That'S certainly one of your best so far! Light but with a little  melancholic twist at the end. Very nice indeed, meine Liebe.

posted by auslander on February 11, 2009 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

A work of art my dear Vogue!
I always relate a blank canvas to a new day; what you paint is what you get and you my dear are a very long way from a blank canvas yet; many blessings and thanks 

posted by mariaki on February 11, 2009 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

Kudos for a lovely write....
Let the bristles of your paint brush continue to glide across the canvass until it's time to hang up your brush.

posted by Texas_Gem on February 10, 2009 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

Vogue
I really like this! It has rhythm, verve, exuberance and a dash of melancholy...

posted by Nautikos on February 10, 2009 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

wow, this is simply amazing.  Great work Vogue

posted by Smittenheimer on February 10, 2009 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Being an artist, I loved the beginning, but the end just totally bummed me
heh he hhehehehehhheeeeeeeeeeee

Lovely words, vogue and too sadly true in their beginnings and in their endings.


posted by benzinha on February 10, 2009 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply

I think you'll pass your easel down to generations to come!  Beautifully put.  Mal

posted by gapcohen on February 10, 2009 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Marvellous poem Vogue. The ending leaves a sense of sadness which promotes a lot of thought  ! Well done.

posted by merkie on February 10, 2009 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Sad and beautiful :-)  Like a reflective monnologue with ones own soul... Bravo!

posted by Sinome on February 10, 2009 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply