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I love this one
As always
posted by
Lanetay
on February 10, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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I avoid personal goodbyes with loved ones as much as possible Sinome
and most especially the long ones; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 10, 2009 at 6:02 AM
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posted by
drohan254
on February 9, 2009 at 11:11 PM
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Sinome
My gawd, after that one I'd crawl over broken glass in the rain just to say goodbye...
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 9, 2009 at 9:23 PM
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yes never take love for granted. It is too precious.
posted by
Kabu
on February 9, 2009 at 9:12 PM
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actually saying "Good bye" is never easy..sometimes actions come
easier, be it lovemaking or something else, and just do what words cannot do..
...
posted by
Rumor
on February 9, 2009 at 8:44 PM
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Nothing to say...savour the moment.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 9, 2009 at 7:25 PM
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Sinome
Sometimes one can transcend the goodbyes and emerge fully in the moment...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 9, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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Sounds like fun...What a way to say goodbye...Superb Marta!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 9, 2009 at 5:44 PM
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Sometimes a short goodbye is more memorable than a long drawn-out one. But, I agree, the rain makes it more poignant.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 9, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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Very romantic. A minute definitely is too short. I would have so much to say.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 9, 2009 at 5:22 PM
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I love your poems
They are so romantic. I love the wonerful pictures you paint with your words and the warm fuzzies and memories they always bring.
posted by
skye08
on February 9, 2009 at 2:14 PM
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Indeed a minute really does seem like forever when it comes to pain.
posted by
Ideologikal
on February 9, 2009 at 1:03 PM
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always lovely and always so touchingly sad.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 9, 2009 at 11:55 AM
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