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                Simple but effective poem. Nice read.
  
                
                    posted by
                    hardilaziz
                     on February 10, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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                    The mood is rockin!!!
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Straightforward
                     on February 10, 2009 at 8:34 AM
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                good old on-going rhyme. cute 


  
                
                    posted by
                    Luz_Briar
                     on February 9, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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                    Love it, love it, love it :)! - Ash
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    ash_pradhan
                     on February 8, 2009 at 6:42 PM
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                    Great piece!!
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Ideologikal
                     on February 8, 2009 at 5:45 PM
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                    Set it to music!
                
                a nice slow, smoky jazz piece, I think. Great!  
                
                    posted by
                    scotcanada
                     on February 8, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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