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The sound and experience of waves can be soothing to the troubled soul and healing.
posted by
mariss9
on February 7, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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Thank you
Thanks for visiting. Enjoy the weekend and be refreshed! Take care my friends!
posted by
merkie
on February 7, 2009 at 9:21 AM
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Fine writing, my friend...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 7, 2009 at 9:02 AM
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Excellent verses, Merkie!
posted by
Katray2
on February 6, 2009 at 11:14 PM
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That seaside so beckons, vivid and simply beautiful.
posted by
goodwhisky
on February 6, 2009 at 11:02 PM
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That seaside so beckons, vivid and simply beautiful.
posted by
goodwhisky
on February 6, 2009 at 11:01 PM
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WOW...Margaret...These are just outstanding!
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 6, 2009 at 10:24 PM
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Very vivid haiku. Great.
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 6, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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Yes!
Definitely a case of less is much, much more.
posted by
malcolm
on February 6, 2009 at 11:01 AM
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absolutely love it, merkie.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on February 6, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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very poignant, merkie, especially "Ragged Tear"...
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posted by
Rumor
on February 6, 2009 at 9:06 AM
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Loved the first one
although my image was of a young teacher - am I warped?
and I would like to visit the locale of the tropical isle please...
posted by
lionreign
on February 6, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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Merkie
Wow – the first one – so few words and yet such a powerful sentiment conveyed! Snap, crackle, POP!
posted by
Troosha
on February 6, 2009 at 8:47 AM
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