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This is brilliant. The movement, the rythym and the images really flow in a waterfall. The bright visual images, such as the deep blue of the sky and the oceans of green make it soft and soothing. The waterfall is excellent for describing the motion of sinking into the environment. A well woven tapestry! I really love it.
posted by
Tiddlypush
on February 15, 2009 at 5:14 AM
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WHAT'S UP NBSP .......you rock!!!!
Nickel back style ......
posted by
Star5_
on February 6, 2009 at 7:52 PM
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A waterfall is a great metaphor.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 6, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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its like a water fall outside my door today
posted by
Lanetay
on February 6, 2009 at 5:52 PM
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Such congruity in the imagery! I love this poem! The imagery cascades like a waterfall too! And I love this line:
We delight, finding heaven in being held , WOW! sammy 
posted by
sam444
on February 6, 2009 at 3:46 PM
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There is something very poetic about a waterfall. You have done justice to both.
But, don't forget,
Romance often begins by a splashing waterfall and ends over a leaky sink. 
posted by
TAPS.
on February 6, 2009 at 10:45 AM
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Sinome, super romantic..this one reads like a special valentine to that
special someone..
....
posted by
Rumor
on February 6, 2009 at 10:13 AM
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Very powerful! as always. God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 6, 2009 at 9:25 AM
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Amazing imagery Sinome.......
and an excellent analogy my friend; beautifully done indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on February 6, 2009 at 3:17 AM
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Passionate and intense poem of love. Kudos!
posted by
hardilaziz
on February 6, 2009 at 1:03 AM
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Stunning work Marta....WOW...I think I need to find that waterfall..lol...You think I can make it before Valintines day?
posted by
Wigopa_
on February 5, 2009 at 11:33 PM
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I never cease to be amazed....
at your writings. They flow together in unison like a smooth running stream. Lovely!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on February 5, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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you capture my heart every single day.
posted by
Kabu
on February 5, 2009 at 10:07 PM
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Enthralling!
posted by
calia14
on February 5, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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