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                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on February 1, 2009 at 2:14 PM
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                Well written indeed! Wonderful imagery! sam 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on February 1, 2009 at 4:53 AM
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                    beautiful writing ...end it very well 
  If first we accept the holy goal,
  To keep our true and immortal soul.
    
                
                    posted by
                    drohan254
                     on January 31, 2009 at 8:59 PM
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                    LOve the rhyme pattern, great poem!  I am afraid of the Grim Reaper
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    hazel_st_cricket
                     on January 31, 2009 at 2:35 PM
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