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I find it interesting that...
you chose to write this from a mother's perspective. It's almost as if you are contemplating how your wife(?) would handle explaining your death to your daughter. Alot of emotion and humanity in this piece!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 30, 2009 at 6:10 AM | link to this | reply

So beautiful and human! Did you tell her the system sucks?

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 29, 2009 at 10:26 PM | link to this | reply

Speechless!

posted by calia14 on January 29, 2009 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on January 29, 2009 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Touching. BCA, Bill*s Cae

 

posted by BC-A on January 29, 2009 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Moving poignant write. Bravo Fred

posted by merkie on January 29, 2009 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Itza on January 29, 2009 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply