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Jack, I love your poetry! It is so realistic I just fall into the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 29, 2009 at 5:08 PM
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A sense of exhaustion... easy on the tongue....i like that line 'and the darkness sighed it in'
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 29, 2009 at 2:57 AM
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Hello Shackleton! You sure relate it like it is! A true poet!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 28, 2009 at 10:58 PM
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Both disturbing and intriguing sir. Excellent! BCA, Bill*s Cae
posted by
BC-A
on January 28, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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Star5_
on January 28, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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