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Wow! There is so much in this one! I adored lick the walls! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 23, 2009 at 3:10 PM
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A lot of rage
Reminded me a bit of an Alanis Morrissette lyric
posted by
malcolm
on January 23, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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that is brutal
but excellently written - the rage blazes from this poem
posted by
lionreign
on January 23, 2009 at 4:46 AM
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The imagery of anger delineated perfectly
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 22, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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"grin of pride", "moan-grope", amazing use of words . . .
posted by
Soaker
on January 22, 2009 at 9:52 PM
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That was a long one
posted by
Lanetay
on January 22, 2009 at 9:07 PM
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disgust and fear
it's a poem about being disgusted with a person's choices and needing to silently observe the whole scenerio. for the full effect, i did not edit the angry tone of the poem
posted by
Luz_Briar
on January 22, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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