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Re: Bhaskar.ing
Such a scholary love you show us...Very well written...WOW Bhaskar.ing I think you should write more poetry.....I thank you my dear mentor for taking this challenge..
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:24 PM
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Re: 9Star
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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Re: OTA
Loved the musical quality of this little diddy...Spendid work! Thank you so much for taking on this Challenge!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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Re: Kabu
WOW....wonderful....letting the words flow...YOU DID LET THE WORDS RHYME!...Too cool..Thank you for doing this wonderful work for the Challenge!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Don't frown my friend...You write great poetry! Thank you so much for taking the challenge
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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Re: MissLola
This is awesome...there is a real magical feel here...Bravo! Thank you for taking this Challenge!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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Re: TAPS
I agree housework is rather monotunus...and windows...lol...let's not get me started on windows...LOL...Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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Re: Troosha
Wow, this is great! Thank you so much...There are such cool, imagery here..Wow...And that you perfer my thoughts on friendship is truly an honor.
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 7:56 PM
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Re: Gypsypoet1975
Thank you for the great comments...I agree a lot of neat things can happen when you drop the riens..
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you so much! I was really concerned with how, the poem read...would love to see you try one some day..
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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Re: Teddypoet
Merci mon cher ami du souhait de grande idée… juste que vous pourriez avoir ajouté vos mots au jeu.
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 23, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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This is very good.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 23, 2009 at 7:15 AM
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Haha delta princess, just look at my 'shattering' poetry
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You may love the aroma of food
Others, a bottle of fine liquor would.
But I love the smell of books
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And even their tattered looks
As I lovingly caress their spine
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I know they are my finest wine.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 22, 2009 at 9:37 PM
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pretty
posted by
Star5_
on January 22, 2009 at 8:08 PM
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he worked at the body shop
when the quill wasnt paying
the feathers only drift
through his mind
through his mind
the feathers caught wing
last time
last time
before the body shop closed
posted by
Blue_feathers
on January 22, 2009 at 7:02 PM
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tis good to let the words flow
thinking fast never slow
As the word comes to mind
write it down it just might Rhyme
This may not be a master poem
but if not tried then never known
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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wigopa
Mechanical things
Stir my thoughts best
How they work
gives me no rest.
Now old,
I have laid my tools down
Writing poetry
Makes me frown.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 22, 2009 at 6:41 PM
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My Shero
Hex specs
On the mind, time
And a friend's end
On the foul line
With a dish
For your spy
Who's a switch
© L. Vidal
(not sure where the title came from!)
posted by
JDM1991
on January 22, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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I like yours and Troosha's. I don't think I'm quite up to that challenge. I'm not much interested in sweeping anything right now--not even my mind, nor vacuuming, nor mopping, nor dusting, for that matter. LOL.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 22, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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Wigopa
To not self edit while putting words to screen is a challenge in itself. But I wiped my mind clear and here’s what popped out. (Although I much prefer your thoughts on friendship versus mine on “time”)
Seconds sweep and weep
The clock reminds
Time centred woes
electric revelations
sinking
Trees beyond my window
shaken not stirred
Photo moments
captured
despite the ticking clock
posted by
Troosha
on January 22, 2009 at 11:11 AM
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Considering that was essentially, the 1st draft... you captured alot of depth and perspective! Alot of good stuff happens when you have free reign!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 22, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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I Like your poem > I will think about the challenge. Good job Marion!
posted by
merkie
on January 22, 2009 at 9:36 AM
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Well done, Marion!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 22, 2009 at 9:13 AM
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