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really a window into your soul
Unspoken moments when volumes were said. ---I loved that line.

It definitely conjured the feeling of a soul being pulled in two directions--nicely done.


posted by NewMentality on January 30, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: like turning the page on the intimacy of someone's life
thanks for reading, sometimes the feelings that come up when I write make me feel alittle naked.

posted by Imaginerain08 on January 25, 2009 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: The fact that u have been able to put it down means u're being able to deal
On most days I agree with that statement, but on some days when my heart recalls things, it feels like I am still there.

posted by Imaginerain08 on January 25, 2009 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

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It was, for sure, the most beautiful  love experience to this point in my life.

posted by Imaginerain08 on January 25, 2009 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This touches me deeply...
Thank you. Im so glad you can relate.

posted by Imaginerain08 on January 25, 2009 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

This touches me deeply...
...something anyone who has ever loved and lost can relate to.

posted by metalrat on January 23, 2009 at 3:10 AM | link to this | reply

 A beautiful poem of a love experience. BCA, Bill*s Cae

posted by BC-A on January 22, 2009 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

The fact that u have been able to put it down means u're being able to deal
with it - seems like that to me?

posted by Straightforward on January 22, 2009 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

like turning the page on the intimacy of someone's life
beautifully done

posted by MiaElla on January 22, 2009 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for the comment....
Yes, it is hard, perhaps one of the hardest things I have ever had to do, and its something that I struggle with everyday.

posted by Imaginerain08 on January 22, 2009 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

The second stanza got me! It's hard loving something you have to give up! nicely done!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 22, 2009 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply