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really a window into your soul
Unspoken moments when volumes were said. ---I loved that line.
It definitely conjured the feeling of a soul being pulled in two directions--nicely done.
posted by
NewMentality
on January 30, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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Re: like turning the page on the intimacy of someone's life
thanks for reading, sometimes the feelings that come up when I write make me feel alittle naked.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on January 25, 2009 at 6:28 AM
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Re: The fact that u have been able to put it down means u're being able to deal
On most days I agree with that statement, but on some days when my heart recalls things, it feels like I am still there.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on January 25, 2009 at 6:27 AM
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It was, for sure, the most beautiful love experience to this point in my life.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on January 25, 2009 at 6:26 AM
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Re: This touches me deeply...
Thank you. Im so glad you can relate.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on January 25, 2009 at 6:25 AM
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This touches me deeply...
...something anyone who has ever loved and lost can relate to.
posted by
metalrat
on January 23, 2009 at 3:10 AM
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A beautiful poem of a love experience. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on January 22, 2009 at 8:44 PM
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The fact that u have been able to put it down means u're being able to deal
with it - seems like that to me?
posted by
Straightforward
on January 22, 2009 at 7:36 PM
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like turning the page on the intimacy of someone's life
beautifully done
posted by
MiaElla
on January 22, 2009 at 1:06 PM
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Thank you for the comment....
Yes, it is hard, perhaps one of the hardest things I have ever had to do, and its something that I struggle with everyday.
posted by
Imaginerain08
on January 22, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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The second stanza got me! It's hard loving something you have to give up! nicely done!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 22, 2009 at 7:46 AM
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