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Thank you each one. I so appreciate your comments.
The contest is not easy to win but the surprises come in the choice of words to make a poem. It is more of a puzzle than a place to win anything. Mostly vanity press, they want you to buy their products and their anthology which you are supossedly published in is sold to you for approximately $60.00. I do not know if any others even read them. Their haiku contest and poetry in motion are more likely winners. Have fun !They have a sister sit poets workshop you can join and post poetry and review others poems but they have a structured form and it is not easy to navigate. So much for my opinion!

posted by merkie on January 20, 2009 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

The end result is very pleasing my dear
good luck with the competition; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 20, 2009 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Some gorgeous phrases in here
And I love the result of a word game - your ability with words and images is incredible

posted by lionreign on January 20, 2009 at 2:44 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie
That is interesting and I'll have to try that luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 19, 2009 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

Looks like a lot of fun...I will have to give it a try sometime! Thank you for showing me Merkie!!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 19, 2009 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

I have done that! Very cool! sam

posted by sam444 on January 19, 2009 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Oh fun!
I haven't tried the poetry in motion game, but I like poetry.com!

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

This is awesome!
 Love it.

posted by Kolekshuns on January 19, 2009 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

I counted less than twenty. This sounds like a good idea. But Poetry.com is not my cup of tea.

posted by EX_TURPI on January 19, 2009 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

Well done!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 19, 2009 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

Don't totally get it, but that's norm for me. HOWEVER, I LOVE the word combos and the arrangement... I can see it's saying what it's meant to! Meant with

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 19, 2009 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

Merkie
I'm not sure why but I just found the ending "come sunburned" quite funny.  That's how I'd like to arrive - if I could. 

posted by Troosha on January 19, 2009 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply