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Wonderfully written.
posted by
Chilitree
on February 16, 2009 at 2:24 AM
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Very, very remarkably expressed, miss yellowrose
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 21, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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Very powerful! God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on January 21, 2009 at 8:44 AM
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amazing concepts. You real poets just blow me away.
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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touching
I love the image of the warrior abandoning the fight for her...
posted by
lionreign
on January 20, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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yellowrose55
Bold, uniquely written luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 19, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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That was both bold and considerate!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 19, 2009 at 3:39 PM
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Nicely done.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 19, 2009 at 1:28 PM
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Ah, but for the warrior there may be no cause and no reason to fight! Expressive imagery too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 19, 2009 at 11:42 AM
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I like how you ended in reverse to the beginning. This poem actually reminds me of Iraq and humanity...thank you, yellow!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 19, 2009 at 3:34 AM
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Stunning expression...Enjoyed this one!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 18, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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