Comments on haiku no. 24

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posted by Mrs_Laly on March 9, 2009 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Naut, I have read this one several times. It means something different everytime. ~

posted by Blue_feathers on February 28, 2009 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

Hey Naut! Today is day 24 since you posted Haiku 24; does that mean we Haiku 25 on day 25! LOL! Shelly  The only reason I know this is because you are on my favorite page!

posted by sam444 on February 12, 2009 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

A haunting haiku

posted by Smittenheimer on February 10, 2009 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

You could write a whole book out of that one, and make a movie.

posted by TAPS. on January 21, 2009 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Tell me more about Haiku
-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on January 19, 2009 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm...
...let me chew on this riddle awhile for an interpretation.

posted by metalrat on January 19, 2009 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

How utterly open: What is the shadow indeed! So many facets to be drawn form the last line! Wow! I adore your Haikus Naut! You are fabulous with them! I think you should write one a week! lol Shelly

posted by sam444 on January 19, 2009 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

For me, Spiritual Recognition! Well done!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 19, 2009 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

well wow. A shivered with silent terror with dust on my nice new gloves.

posted by Kabu on January 18, 2009 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Vivid imagery!
Well done!

posted by calia14 on January 18, 2009 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply