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posted by
Mrs_Laly
on March 9, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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Naut, I have read this one several times. It means something different everytime. ~
posted by
Blue_feathers
on February 28, 2009 at 7:12 AM
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Hey Naut! Today is day 24 since you posted Haiku 24; does that mean we Haiku 25 on day 25! LOL! Shelly


The only reason I know this is because you are on my favorite page!
posted by
sam444
on February 12, 2009 at 2:20 PM
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A haunting haiku
posted by
Smittenheimer
on February 10, 2009 at 10:51 AM
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You could write a whole book out of that one, and make a movie.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 21, 2009 at 12:39 PM
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Tell me more about Haiku
-=RenSpur=-
posted by
RenSpur
on January 19, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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Hmmm...
...let me chew on this riddle awhile for an interpretation.
posted by
metalrat
on January 19, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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How utterly open: What is the shadow indeed! So many facets to be drawn form the last line! Wow! I adore your Haikus Naut! You are fabulous with them! I think you should write one a week! lol Shelly


posted by
sam444
on January 19, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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For me, Spiritual Recognition! Well done!


posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 19, 2009 at 4:26 AM
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well wow. A shivered with silent terror with dust on my nice new gloves.
posted by
Kabu
on January 18, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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Vivid imagery!
Well done!
posted by
calia14
on January 18, 2009 at 7:40 PM
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