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I know when I have had enough of every day
For then my thoughts cry out to play
A dreamy look comes over me
As my soul roams far and free
As new day rises in winter’s sky
it captures heart and entices eyes
and into begging sun we lean
to follow heart and dream to dream
Beautiful moments in life comes and goes fast
Just make that as a memorable one…
For time is so short wtih love we endured
common love for all can heal and cure.
posted by
Mystereo
on February 5, 2009 at 2:46 PM
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Very nice! Thank you. It will be added to the poem.
posted by
BetsyLewis
on January 18, 2009 at 6:26 PM
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here is my addition...
For when I am done
All will hail to me
This is what I see
Light winning over darkness
Never casting shadows again
on our awareness..
Hope I did it right?
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 18, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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