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I post two lines now I will add to the poem.

I know when I have had enough of every day
For then my thoughts cry out to play
A dreamy look comes over me
As my soul roams far and free

As new day rises in winter’s sky
it captures heart and entices eyes
and into begging sun we lean
to follow heart and dream to dream

One keep stepping no grass under one's feet
You got to close the past to move to the beat

posted by Mystereo on February 5, 2009 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Another poet who still writes traditional verse.
Bravo!

-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on January 17, 2009 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful moments in life comes and goes fast

just make that as a memorable one.....

my lines for ya....

posted by Star5_ on January 17, 2009 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply