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"Blurry with passion" strikes me.
How in love you must be! Very heart-felt
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 16, 2009 at 6:23 AM
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Sinome
How you can write and share such passion is truly a wonderful gift for us luv. This was fantastic
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 15, 2009 at 7:52 PM
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Sinome
Whoa.... such a private moment shared with us; a moment of true connection and then the sadness that followed.
I can't help but wonder if writing is theraputic for you. You can just put it all out there.
posted by
Troosha
on January 15, 2009 at 4:00 PM
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Somebody throw a bucket of water on me!
-=RenSpur=-
posted by
RenSpur
on January 15, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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A perfect image my dear Sinome
just the right amount of passion and emotion; beautifully done my friend really a superb piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 15, 2009 at 3:01 AM
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Strong and passionate
This is one of your best, in my opinion. I like the sultry imagery, but it goes so much deeper than that in this poem. Fantastic!
posted by
calia14
on January 14, 2009 at 9:33 PM
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As good as it gets, Sinome...
...and hopefully a love like that would last a lifetime.
posted by
metalrat
on January 14, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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Sinome
Exquisitely tender - a symphony of love and passion...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 14, 2009 at 8:07 PM
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wow you are heating up the screen, you been taking lessons from me
posted by
Lanetay
on January 14, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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Very vivid imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 14, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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This is like a prayer oh talented one.
posted by
Kabu
on January 14, 2009 at 6:03 PM
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OMW!!! I don't even know what to say! I don't think I have the words in my vocabulary, everyone that comes to mind fails me! But I will say its passion is so moving! It is incredulous imagery! I am in awe! Sweetie, I came to tell you my secret and now I am befuddled by exquisite imagery! How fortuitous is that! First, thank you for your kind words on Opus 1. I came to tell you (my secret, lol) that when I write rhyming poetry in a specific form I read your poetry to get a feel for the meter I want to employ and the cadence as well. Your imagery opens up my mind and I feel exceedingly free to create! Your poem from yesterday help me create Opus 1. Prior to that I was working on a sonnet (lol, I can't write poetry with love for a theme); I was hung up with the imagery so I quit! It is iambic meter (sonnet is iambic pentameter), love, the first octave addresses the emotion and the sestet is an explanation comment or a summary. So after your poem for tonight I should be able to write what I previously thought to be impossible! Thank you sweetie! Keep writing so I can. lol Love you! xoxoxo sammy 
posted by
sam444
on January 14, 2009 at 4:21 PM
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