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I relate so well to this poem...
...not just for it's excellence, but, because so much of my life has been spent in transition.
posted by
metalrat
on January 17, 2009 at 2:10 PM
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Good morning! Very wise words! I appreciate them and shall kept them close! You may have saved me from making a very foolish mistake! Thank you! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 17, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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This is wonderful imagery!
Between the two I lost myself and the trajectory... just framed this philosophical poem! It is one to truly ponder! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 16, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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dOlly
You are too gifted a poet. 'Haze' is the perfect word to reflect the dichotomy of being caught in in-betweenity.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 15, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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Caught in a state of in-betweenity! Pretty good!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 14, 2009 at 11:27 PM
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A journey and a rest stop between the two destinations.
posted by
merkie
on January 14, 2009 at 9:59 AM
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I understand it very well...
posted by
Star5_
on January 14, 2009 at 6:27 AM
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In between two worlds can be quite tricky my friend!
be careful not to cross them! Excellent post; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 14, 2009 at 6:20 AM
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That is so easy to do--
lose oneself between the two.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 14, 2009 at 6:17 AM
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